'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
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'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
Hey!
Do you like the story so far? I hope you do! Put your comments, flames, critisism and my favourite, praise down here so I can know what you like about the story! I'll also be posting this fiction of FanFiction.net and I'll have in the disclaimer that your characters belong to all of you.
I'll try and add as many of the site characters in as possible, even if for a little bit, but the main antagonists are the Homunculi, their goal is to convert Alexander and get the stone and the usual, and the main protagonists are Edward and Alphonse Elric. The erason I didn't say 'Alexander' was because he's the second-to-main goal of the homunculi in this, so basically, he's the main neutral party.
All of your characters will have their respective roles.
Actually, the descendant characters will have important roles as well as the aforementioned mains, since they're descendants of who the Elric brothers know, and Tobi Mustang will have a good part in this because of it. Those with strong or frequent connections with our favourite good-natured homunculus -Al- will also have stronger parts since the Elrics will frequently be with Alexander in the fiction, as he's the only family they have at the time being AND he lets them stay with him in his dorm room.
Besides, what's more fun than writing a little drama when Edo finds out Alexander's secret? kuku.
Well, you've read the story to it's latest chapters, I presume, so I dont need to say anymore. I hope you like it so far and please, by all means, give me your reviews!!
Do you like the story so far? I hope you do! Put your comments, flames, critisism and my favourite, praise down here so I can know what you like about the story! I'll also be posting this fiction of FanFiction.net and I'll have in the disclaimer that your characters belong to all of you.
I'll try and add as many of the site characters in as possible, even if for a little bit, but the main antagonists are the Homunculi, their goal is to convert Alexander and get the stone and the usual, and the main protagonists are Edward and Alphonse Elric. The erason I didn't say 'Alexander' was because he's the second-to-main goal of the homunculi in this, so basically, he's the main neutral party.
All of your characters will have their respective roles.
Actually, the descendant characters will have important roles as well as the aforementioned mains, since they're descendants of who the Elric brothers know, and Tobi Mustang will have a good part in this because of it. Those with strong or frequent connections with our favourite good-natured homunculus -Al- will also have stronger parts since the Elrics will frequently be with Alexander in the fiction, as he's the only family they have at the time being AND he lets them stay with him in his dorm room.
Besides, what's more fun than writing a little drama when Edo finds out Alexander's secret? kuku.
Well, you've read the story to it's latest chapters, I presume, so I dont need to say anymore. I hope you like it so far and please, by all means, give me your reviews!!
Alaric- Posts : 1368
Age : 29
Location : Here, There, Everywhere
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Ability: Alexander Elric
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Rank:: Colonel/Envy
Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
nice story.xD when you do chapter 2, can you include my character ^o^
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Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
You should hurry and update, Al, I'm looking forward to it.
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Alaric- Posts : 1368
Age : 29
Location : Here, There, Everywhere
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Ability: Alexander Elric
State/Homuncules Title::
Rank:: Colonel/Envy
Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
Update. Now. I want frickin more. And when I was reading it, I could totally picture it... and then I pictured Yuan meeting fifteen year old Ling... funny XD
Yuan Yao/ Greed- Posts : 1292
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Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
XD Sure! I'm glad you like it -nice new profile image, BTW-. Right now I'm focused on Trapped Soul, but I'll start writing up the next chapter ASAP XD
Alaric- Posts : 1368
Age : 29
Location : Here, There, Everywhere
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Ability: Alexander Elric
State/Homuncules Title::
Rank:: Colonel/Envy
Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
If you don't, I will stalk you! And thanks ^^ It turned out good, but looks way better full size.
Yuan Yao/ Greed- Posts : 1292
Age : 27
Location : Wanderer
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Ability: Yuan Yao
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Rank:: Greed/Emperor of Xing
Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
Cool to see you got some of it up. I like the little arguement you had in it towards the end, lol.
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Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
hehe, lol
I'll write more when I've finished 'Trapped Soul'
I'll write more when I've finished 'Trapped Soul'
Alaric- Posts : 1368
Age : 29
Location : Here, There, Everywhere
Personell File
Ability: Alexander Elric
State/Homuncules Title::
Rank:: Colonel/Envy
Re: 'Modern Day Alchemist' - The Official Site Fan-Fiction: Comment Box!
This is really good!!
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Alaric- Posts : 1368
Age : 29
Location : Here, There, Everywhere
Personell File
Ability: Alexander Elric
State/Homuncules Title::
Rank:: Colonel/Envy
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