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Jack Monki
Name:
Jack Monki
State Name:
Metal / Blood alchemist.
Alias/Nickname:
Joker.
Age:
17
Gender:
Male.
Race:
Amestrian
DOB:
13.1
Birthplace:
Unknown.
Current Location:
Wanderer
Height:
192 Cm.
Weight:
67 Kg.
Eye color:
Red.
Hair color:
Black.
Hair Style:
Picture below.
Clothing:
Picture below.
Overall Pic:
Pet Breed:
Dragon Chimera. Combination of a Lizard and a bat.
Pet gender:
Male.
Pet name:
Muffy.
Size:
About 200 centimetres long, and 95 centimetres width.
'Jacques have found Muffy, when he were lost in woods. It can breathe fire, but it will work only if Muffy is close to enemy. This is because the fire is only about two metres.'
Personality: Jack usually maintains a stern, serious and distanced personality, but often loses his temper in a goofy and exaggerated comic style. He can also be extremely intimidating, easily frightening weaker opponents with his glare. He has a strong sense of leadership and reasoning. Whether he agrees with them or not, he will stand by his friends decisions, stepping in only to point out the seriousness of a situation where it has been overlooked by his mates (most notably when they wanted to bring one of their friends back into the group after he had challenged another friend to a duel over girl and lost).
As a running gag, Jack has an awful sense of direction (even worse than Blind one's) and is capable of getting lost on a straight path. He usually assumes the others are the ones who have gotten lost and grows impatient with them. He is teased often because of it.
While he travels from one place to another, he normally either trains with weights or naps (sometimes both at the same time), only to be regularly awakened in a rather violent way by strangers. He also likes to drink alcohol (sake), almost to the degree that Pedobear likes little girls, and, like Chuck Norris, has an inhumanly-high tolerance for alcohol. He is also regularly reverts to drastic measures to solve simple problems, suggesting solutions that others would normally consider to be their last possible, worst-case-scenario choices. For example, when he and his friend were accidentally handcuffed together, Jack's first suggested solution was to cut off one of their hands. He also is one of the first 'gang' members to suggest killing someone or threatening to kill someone.
Jack can also be very vigorous and won't back down when he is determined to achieve a goal or defeat an enemy. The risks that he will often take to pursue his dream of becoming the world's greatest 'Peacekeeper' often leave others wondering if he is crazy. As far as Jack is concerned though, only he has the right to call himself "crazy". However, he is able to accept defeat when he perceives it to be inevitable. When Jack has the intention to fight seriously, he will use everything he has got. Jack lives for the thrill of combat; Scratchmen Anknoun commented on his "insane killing intent," acknowledging that Jack was a "demon." He also has a habit of smiling joyfully whenever he faces a particularly skilled opponent, which often unnerves both friend and foe alike.
Jack can provide important and logical decisions at critical times by evaluating the situation from an objective point of view, as he did in their hometown by evaluating the best way to handle what, at the time, seemed like few dude's betrayal, and again when the 'gang' wanted to bring back friend after he challenged the another friend of Jack's, to a duel over the girl and lost. Jack is the one who noted that the friend was at fault for leaving the 'gang' of his own accord, and they shouldn't take him back unless he apologized for his mistake. However, while on some occasions he can be the voice of reason, most of the time Jack rushes into things and leaves it to fate to decide the details, much to the horror of friends as he fails to see his own fault. One of the most noticeable instances of this is when he took an interest in the cursed knife, that he had created as his first metal alchemy try, and left it up to fate to decide if he would wield it by testing his luck against the knife's curse; he tossed the knife spinning into the air and extended his left arm into its falling path, to see if it would cut him, fully aware that the knife was sharp enough to easily amputate his arm.
Likes:
Girls
Pizza
Blood
Black
Darkness
Sweets
Nights
Dislikes:
Nothing strange in here, actually.
Dark Secret:
Sadistic.
Deepest Fear:
That Muffy will be killed. :3
Idol:
-
Closest Friend:
Muffy At the moment.
Rival:
-
Skills:
He has unknown alchemy type. Blood and Metal. He can modify himself as he wants, like Envy and they can, but he also can use blood. He can create a weapon from his blood, or from metal.
Blood & Metal:
Whenever he is able to touch inside of enemy, he can do very bad damage inside of him. If he even little stabs your head, and leaves scar, he have ability to took you to his own world, called 'Mad World.' Its place where Jack can do everything that he wants. He can kill the enemy, or anything. Torture him, slow the enemy and chase him, make the enemy unable to do anything, and watch her / his family or someone close to him dying. This also gives him everything that the enemy knows at the moment. And if he stabs through heart, and the enemy isnt going to die, he can try to modify the heart, or explode it. This tooks one post charge first. This works like this on every organ. He is also able to mutate his arms, chest, head, or anypart of him, to weapon. But, if he mutates his left hand fully to metal, it will reduce the movement, and actually, it might kill him. He usually keeps on places like hand, or fingers. He turns usually his fingers as 'knives.' He is also able to make a weapon from metal, if he only touches it.
Weapons:
His skills, and weapons that he creates.
Transportation:
Muffy.
Special Item:
His tie. And little snacks for him and Muffy.
Family:
Dead. Died when necromorphs attacked his home.
History:
Nothing is known about Jack other than as a boy, Jack trained in a dojo in his hometown. Jack states, in one fight, that once he decided he would become an invincible Peacekeeper, he left his life behind.
Even as a child, Jack was strong enough to defeat most adults, but could not defeat Ku, the Dojo master's son. After their 1337th fight (and Ku's 1337th victory) Jack challenged him in private for one more match - with real swords. He beat Jack, and he cried with frustration, telling Ku his dream of being the world's greatest Peacekeeper. Hearing this, Ku confided in Jack, telling him that he shared the same dream but knew he could never attain it - her father had told him that boys like him could never be true Peacekeepers, and that him fighting potential would decrease as he grews up. Jack, annoyed by him defeatist attitude in spite of repeatedly winning against him, told him that one day he would beat him because he was more skilled, not just because he was a 'Boy like that'. The two make a promise - that either of them must become the worlds best Peacekeeper. The next day, Ku suffered a necromorphs attack, where he got killed. Much to Jack's anger and disappointment. Realizing that he would never have a chance to fulfil his dream, Jack took it upon himself, asking his sensei for his sword. He claimed it and went to his backyard, to bury it.
Somehow he eventually learned of Piis, who is currently the greatest swordsman in the world. Jack eventually went to sea looking to find and challenge Piis to a duel, but got lost and could not return to his home. Since fighting is more or less the only thing Jack is really good at, he would usually take on a bounty hunter job in order to pay for place to live and meals. From then on, he quickly made a reputation as a "Peacekeeper". In a point of this time, he met and befriended John and 'Pancake'.
Because of his reputation, Jack was offered a position and a number in Bountyhunter Group because of his bounty hunting skills, but declined when he was not allowed to become the boss. Afterwards, he killed the person who offered, an earlier Master Nubcake of "BG", for trying to kill him for refusing.
Lev (Gang leader) asks Jack to become the first of his gang. During his journey, Jack arrived in town where Shawn, the spoiled son of the corrupted Soldier captain Mat, released his pet wolf in town. It tried to attack a girl named Ann, but Jack saved her by killing it.
A few days before Jack was supposed to be freed, 'Pancake' and Lev arrived in town with the intentions of 'Pancake' joining the Soldiers and Lev inviting Jack to be his first gangmember. They eventually arrived where Jack was being held, in time to witness Ann trying to feed him some riceballs, only to be thrown out by Shawn. After they left, Lev asked Jack to join him but he flatly refused to become a gangmember. He asked Lev to feed him the dirtied riceballs and thank Ann for him, revealing his kindness. Later in town, Ann explained to Lev and 'Pancake' the reason for Jack's capture, which only reinforces Lev's decision to have him as his crewman. When Shawn states that he would execute Jack the next day, Lev angrily punches him for breaking his promise, which send Shawno scurrying to his father, seeking revenge.
With the promise of giving Jack his swords back if he'd join Lev's crew, Lev went to the Soldier Base. Lev caught Mat's wrath and forced Shawn to show where Jack's swords were. Meanwhile, 'Pancake' explained the situation to Jack while trying to untie him. Lev came back just in time to save them from a firing squad. Refusing to die, Jack accepted Lev's invitation and revealed his unique fighting style. He also revealed his dream of becoming the best Peacekeeper in the world, which Lev supports. Lev fought with Mat. However, when Shawn threatened to kill 'Pancake', Lev knocked him out while Jack defeated the captain.
The Soldiers, seeing their tyrant leader finally defeated, rejoiced and allowed Lev and Jack to go free. However, since they were pirates, the Soldiers asked them to leave the island but promised not to report them to headquarters. As they were leaving, Commander Rammer asked about Pancakes's past. To help 'Pancake' hide it, Lev provoked him into starting a brief fight between them. Jack stopped the fight before it could get too serious, but it was enough for 'Pancake' to muster up the courage to ask Rammer if he could join the Soldiers, for which Rammer granted permission. Upon leaving, Lev and Jack were saluted by 'Pancake' and the Soldiers for their efforts. Lev and Jack then sailed onto their next destination.
Sadly, after few years, Lev got killed and the whole gang got killed. Only survivor were Jack. They were in building, that were abandoned many years ago. Suddenly, there were necromorphs under the building, outside of it and everywhere, they killed everyone they saw. Jack looked few times. Lev were dead; His another arm were ripped off, and he had been stabbed many times. Jack left the place as fast as possible. He went to woods, where he met Muffy, and befriended him.
RP Sample:
This is from TNRPG (The Naruto RPG) site.
Jack Monki
State Name:
Metal / Blood alchemist.
Alias/Nickname:
Joker.
Age:
17
Gender:
Male.
Race:
Amestrian
DOB:
13.1
Birthplace:
Unknown.
Current Location:
Wanderer
Height:
192 Cm.
Weight:
67 Kg.
Eye color:
Red.
Hair color:
Black.
Hair Style:
Picture below.
Clothing:
Picture below.
Overall Pic:
- Spoiler:
Pet Breed:
Dragon Chimera. Combination of a Lizard and a bat.
Pet gender:
Male.
Pet name:
Muffy.
Size:
About 200 centimetres long, and 95 centimetres width.
'Jacques have found Muffy, when he were lost in woods. It can breathe fire, but it will work only if Muffy is close to enemy. This is because the fire is only about two metres.'
Personality: Jack usually maintains a stern, serious and distanced personality, but often loses his temper in a goofy and exaggerated comic style. He can also be extremely intimidating, easily frightening weaker opponents with his glare. He has a strong sense of leadership and reasoning. Whether he agrees with them or not, he will stand by his friends decisions, stepping in only to point out the seriousness of a situation where it has been overlooked by his mates (most notably when they wanted to bring one of their friends back into the group after he had challenged another friend to a duel over girl and lost).
As a running gag, Jack has an awful sense of direction (even worse than Blind one's) and is capable of getting lost on a straight path. He usually assumes the others are the ones who have gotten lost and grows impatient with them. He is teased often because of it.
While he travels from one place to another, he normally either trains with weights or naps (sometimes both at the same time), only to be regularly awakened in a rather violent way by strangers. He also likes to drink alcohol (sake), almost to the degree that Pedobear likes little girls, and, like Chuck Norris, has an inhumanly-high tolerance for alcohol. He is also regularly reverts to drastic measures to solve simple problems, suggesting solutions that others would normally consider to be their last possible, worst-case-scenario choices. For example, when he and his friend were accidentally handcuffed together, Jack's first suggested solution was to cut off one of their hands. He also is one of the first 'gang' members to suggest killing someone or threatening to kill someone.
Jack can also be very vigorous and won't back down when he is determined to achieve a goal or defeat an enemy. The risks that he will often take to pursue his dream of becoming the world's greatest 'Peacekeeper' often leave others wondering if he is crazy. As far as Jack is concerned though, only he has the right to call himself "crazy". However, he is able to accept defeat when he perceives it to be inevitable. When Jack has the intention to fight seriously, he will use everything he has got. Jack lives for the thrill of combat; Scratchmen Anknoun commented on his "insane killing intent," acknowledging that Jack was a "demon." He also has a habit of smiling joyfully whenever he faces a particularly skilled opponent, which often unnerves both friend and foe alike.
Jack can provide important and logical decisions at critical times by evaluating the situation from an objective point of view, as he did in their hometown by evaluating the best way to handle what, at the time, seemed like few dude's betrayal, and again when the 'gang' wanted to bring back friend after he challenged the another friend of Jack's, to a duel over the girl and lost. Jack is the one who noted that the friend was at fault for leaving the 'gang' of his own accord, and they shouldn't take him back unless he apologized for his mistake. However, while on some occasions he can be the voice of reason, most of the time Jack rushes into things and leaves it to fate to decide the details, much to the horror of friends as he fails to see his own fault. One of the most noticeable instances of this is when he took an interest in the cursed knife, that he had created as his first metal alchemy try, and left it up to fate to decide if he would wield it by testing his luck against the knife's curse; he tossed the knife spinning into the air and extended his left arm into its falling path, to see if it would cut him, fully aware that the knife was sharp enough to easily amputate his arm.
Likes:
Girls
Pizza
Blood
Black
Darkness
Sweets
Nights
Dislikes:
Nothing strange in here, actually.
Dark Secret:
Sadistic.
Deepest Fear:
That Muffy will be killed. :3
Idol:
-
Closest Friend:
Muffy At the moment.
Rival:
-
Skills:
He has unknown alchemy type. Blood and Metal. He can modify himself as he wants, like Envy and they can, but he also can use blood. He can create a weapon from his blood, or from metal.
Blood & Metal:
Whenever he is able to touch inside of enemy, he can do very bad damage inside of him. If he even little stabs your head, and leaves scar, he have ability to took you to his own world, called 'Mad World.' Its place where Jack can do everything that he wants. He can kill the enemy, or anything. Torture him, slow the enemy and chase him, make the enemy unable to do anything, and watch her / his family or someone close to him dying. This also gives him everything that the enemy knows at the moment. And if he stabs through heart, and the enemy isnt going to die, he can try to modify the heart, or explode it. This tooks one post charge first. This works like this on every organ. He is also able to mutate his arms, chest, head, or anypart of him, to weapon. But, if he mutates his left hand fully to metal, it will reduce the movement, and actually, it might kill him. He usually keeps on places like hand, or fingers. He turns usually his fingers as 'knives.' He is also able to make a weapon from metal, if he only touches it.
Weapons:
His skills, and weapons that he creates.
Transportation:
Muffy.
Special Item:
His tie. And little snacks for him and Muffy.
Family:
Dead. Died when necromorphs attacked his home.
History:
Nothing is known about Jack other than as a boy, Jack trained in a dojo in his hometown. Jack states, in one fight, that once he decided he would become an invincible Peacekeeper, he left his life behind.
Even as a child, Jack was strong enough to defeat most adults, but could not defeat Ku, the Dojo master's son. After their 1337th fight (and Ku's 1337th victory) Jack challenged him in private for one more match - with real swords. He beat Jack, and he cried with frustration, telling Ku his dream of being the world's greatest Peacekeeper. Hearing this, Ku confided in Jack, telling him that he shared the same dream but knew he could never attain it - her father had told him that boys like him could never be true Peacekeepers, and that him fighting potential would decrease as he grews up. Jack, annoyed by him defeatist attitude in spite of repeatedly winning against him, told him that one day he would beat him because he was more skilled, not just because he was a 'Boy like that'. The two make a promise - that either of them must become the worlds best Peacekeeper. The next day, Ku suffered a necromorphs attack, where he got killed. Much to Jack's anger and disappointment. Realizing that he would never have a chance to fulfil his dream, Jack took it upon himself, asking his sensei for his sword. He claimed it and went to his backyard, to bury it.
Somehow he eventually learned of Piis, who is currently the greatest swordsman in the world. Jack eventually went to sea looking to find and challenge Piis to a duel, but got lost and could not return to his home. Since fighting is more or less the only thing Jack is really good at, he would usually take on a bounty hunter job in order to pay for place to live and meals. From then on, he quickly made a reputation as a "Peacekeeper". In a point of this time, he met and befriended John and 'Pancake'.
Because of his reputation, Jack was offered a position and a number in Bountyhunter Group because of his bounty hunting skills, but declined when he was not allowed to become the boss. Afterwards, he killed the person who offered, an earlier Master Nubcake of "BG", for trying to kill him for refusing.
Lev (Gang leader) asks Jack to become the first of his gang. During his journey, Jack arrived in town where Shawn, the spoiled son of the corrupted Soldier captain Mat, released his pet wolf in town. It tried to attack a girl named Ann, but Jack saved her by killing it.
A few days before Jack was supposed to be freed, 'Pancake' and Lev arrived in town with the intentions of 'Pancake' joining the Soldiers and Lev inviting Jack to be his first gangmember. They eventually arrived where Jack was being held, in time to witness Ann trying to feed him some riceballs, only to be thrown out by Shawn. After they left, Lev asked Jack to join him but he flatly refused to become a gangmember. He asked Lev to feed him the dirtied riceballs and thank Ann for him, revealing his kindness. Later in town, Ann explained to Lev and 'Pancake' the reason for Jack's capture, which only reinforces Lev's decision to have him as his crewman. When Shawn states that he would execute Jack the next day, Lev angrily punches him for breaking his promise, which send Shawno scurrying to his father, seeking revenge.
With the promise of giving Jack his swords back if he'd join Lev's crew, Lev went to the Soldier Base. Lev caught Mat's wrath and forced Shawn to show where Jack's swords were. Meanwhile, 'Pancake' explained the situation to Jack while trying to untie him. Lev came back just in time to save them from a firing squad. Refusing to die, Jack accepted Lev's invitation and revealed his unique fighting style. He also revealed his dream of becoming the best Peacekeeper in the world, which Lev supports. Lev fought with Mat. However, when Shawn threatened to kill 'Pancake', Lev knocked him out while Jack defeated the captain.
The Soldiers, seeing their tyrant leader finally defeated, rejoiced and allowed Lev and Jack to go free. However, since they were pirates, the Soldiers asked them to leave the island but promised not to report them to headquarters. As they were leaving, Commander Rammer asked about Pancakes's past. To help 'Pancake' hide it, Lev provoked him into starting a brief fight between them. Jack stopped the fight before it could get too serious, but it was enough for 'Pancake' to muster up the courage to ask Rammer if he could join the Soldiers, for which Rammer granted permission. Upon leaving, Lev and Jack were saluted by 'Pancake' and the Soldiers for their efforts. Lev and Jack then sailed onto their next destination.
Sadly, after few years, Lev got killed and the whole gang got killed. Only survivor were Jack. They were in building, that were abandoned many years ago. Suddenly, there were necromorphs under the building, outside of it and everywhere, they killed everyone they saw. Jack looked few times. Lev were dead; His another arm were ripped off, and he had been stabbed many times. Jack left the place as fast as possible. He went to woods, where he met Muffy, and befriended him.
RP Sample:
This is from TNRPG (The Naruto RPG) site.
- Spoiler:
- He had brought the Feitans body to his camp. He hided it well and would continue the puppet when he had sometime. He went to the body. He thought what he could do to it to make it more powerful. He actually knew what to do. He took a sharp stone from the ground. He went to make it sharper and making it to form of a knife. He made the items that he needed to make a puppet from Feitan. He left them on the table. He had been doing those items for seven or ten hours now, and they were master pieces. Sanmaru went to sleep. He wanted only to rest now...
Creating his first puppet: Feitan, or actually Taka. (Hawk)
Part 1, Making the dead body alive.
Sanmaru woke up after finishing his Katon training. (What is still in progress -.-') The sun were shining, there were a little clouds on the sky. The day were beautiful. It were a special day to Amegakure. Normally there is a rain in amegakure so these days are rarely. Sanmaru step out of his tent, eating a sandvich. Yawn. Sanmaru were tired as hell. He have been doing such many things in a week. But he cant give up. He must continue. (Thriller Start!) Sanmaru had finished his sandvich. He ran a little lap, something about six kilometres. He went to swim, only for a little while. He did stink before that.. And he will stink again. It will not be very clean week. Sanmaru would have to do a Marionet.. From his old "Friend's" body. Sanmaru drink a cup of water, after finishing that, Sanmaru went to the body. He had to make the puppet able to use chakra. Of course, its able to use chakra even without Sanmarus help, but with help of Sanmaru, it would be able to use more Chakra. This was maybe the hardest way, because he had harmed him in the fight pretty badly. He opened the chest of Feitan. He put his right hand in, trying to make a chakra source inside of Feitan. He used over half of his chakra. Something around 60-70 percents. It were hard, but it were not over. Sanmaru would have to took all of the organs out from his body and make it a weapon. It werent something that kid would watch. Sanmarus hands were already bloody, all around. He were grinning little evily. He took the heart off. Carefully. It were beautiful organism. Sanmaru had cut the organisms around it carefully off. Sanmaru moved the heart out from his way, and the chakra that were around the body, started to gather into the place that Sanmaru were pointing. He had been doing this for a while already. This were his way to make the puppet able to generate chakra and so on. He needed much more chakra so this would not be a one day job. He generated 50% of chakra he had put inside of Feitans dead body into the chest, causing it to be reflexible and able to generate chakra to that area. He cut all of the organisms off. He took his hand off from Feitans body. He started to think, what he should do to that part. He got one idea. He made the body so that Sanmaru would be able to add anything, anytime he would want. He had avoid the bones infront of organisms and now he knew what he would do. He breaked all of them. He put them aside. He would make weapons from those. He would make a doll from human body so the bones werent needed. He went to the outside and cutted few trees down. It took a little time but now he would be able to do knees and so on. Sanmaru went to the body, took the bones, made them sharper, almost like kunais. He took the smaller knife from the table. The blade of it were only about 5mm wide and were good for joints. Sanmaru made little wooden balls to be in the place of joints. They would make the fingers, and everything to move like a doll. He put them into the joint points of hand first. When he had done that, he took wire from the table and sew the parts together. He sew the chest too. The finger were fully reflexive now. Sanmaru grinned evily, knowing that this puppet would work, actually. He made the another fingers too. He made hidden weapon on the finger tips. He put small, senbon like bones on them. The puppet would be able to grab everything easily. They were 3-4 cm long, as long as the first part from finger. It made the puppet able to move his fingers as Sanmaru just wanted. He also wanted to add few weapons in the puppets hands too. He would make them when he would have finished with the joints. Sanmaru took the another hand and made the same that he had done for the another hand. Sanmaru were proud of this what he had done already. He also replaced the whole hands joints, making the hand little harder to broke. You know, if the joint of your hand (One of the largest, in the center.) brokes its almost impossible to repair. But back to the thread. Sanmaru added the wooden part to the another hand, too. Sanmaru wanted that the Feitan, or Taka, would be able to use Feitans original techniques, and that was the reason for adding chakra around the body. Sanmaru went for the legs, he took the bones off, replaced them with wood. Sanmaru had a special style. He were making a scales of bones for extra defense. He covered the wooden parts, like replaced bones, with thin bone scales. Sanmaru replaced the knee with bigger wooden ball. It were perfect. The "knee" were moving perfectly, like arms of the marionet. Sanmaru replaced also the feet. Legs were a place that Sanmaru didnt want to attach any weapons. Yet. He also added little of the chakra that he had insert inside of the body, to leg. When he had done that, he went to the another leg. He made the same. Sanmaru sew the legs and secured the body. He wanted to have a little rest. He hid the marionet making place. He went to sleep. Only thing that he did remember before he fall asleep were the goal of his. Perfect Marionet.
Day Two.
Sanmaru had woke up a hour ago. He were in a pretty good mood right now. He went to the body again. He had done arms, chest and legs. Remaining places were stomach, neck, back and head. Then it would be time for adding weapons. Sanmaru cut the stomach wide open, took the organisms away and put little chakra inside it. These were pretty difficult place to make, because there would be alot of wood to need. Sanmaru had to do about one or two centimetres long wood pieces for getting the stomach to work, actually. He made them in one hour. He put them in their places, glueing them with chakra. When they were together, Sanmaru made something jelly-like glue, and put it in those pieces. It were little like joints. It were flexible, so the body would be able to crouch. The stomach were done, and Sanmaru moved to neck. He opened it carefully. This were pretty important place in making a Marionet. Sanmaru removed the adam's apple. He made the parts of neck like he made the stomach. Feitans body were full of wood and thin bone scales. Sanmaru put his hand in the head of Feitan. This would remove Feitan from the world. Sanmaru removed the chin. This were the part he didnt like. He had to remove all of the teeths and the gums. When he had done that, he replaced the mouth with wooden like mouth, that would open like all of the puppets mouth does. He cut the cheeks open and made the mouth flexible, able to generate chakra from there, for like jutsus that reguire mouth. Or just for talking. Mouth were done now. Sanmaru moved for the eyes. Sanmaru made the eyes to look a like. They were the real eyes, actually. Sanmaru just used a lil bit chakra to keep them on. They were only original part on the body. The skin had been replaced with wood and bones, and so were the flesh. Sanmaru were almost done now. He opened the skull. He carefully removed the brains and put them aside. He made the same thing that he had made for the chest. He put some of his chakra inside there. Sanmaru removed the organisms inside head, expect eyes. He put wooden to cover the head. And again, the bone scale. There were only over 100 bones left.. Sanmaru had done the body part now. Its time for weapons now.
Part 2, Creating the killing machine.
Sanmaru opened the arm again. He had already a plan, about what he would do. He went to the bone table, took one of the biggest bones and made a thirty-centimetres long blade from it. It were sharp as kunai, or katana. The width of it were about six-centimetres. Sanmaru hid it in the arm. When he would want it would come out from there, little like some assassins had in the middle age. This were just pretty much bigger one. He made it on the right hand. Sanmaru tried how it would work; It worked perfectly. There were a self created lock that would open only if Sanmaru would want it to do so. It were a mechanism of wooden and bones: When the hand moves in right direction, it would come out. Sanmaru sew it and went for the another arm. He made the same thing. The hands were armed now. Sanmaru went to the head. He opened the mouth of his Marionet, and took little wooden from the table. He took a four-centimetres width bone. It were like a long, straight spike. He put it on the palate. He made a hole in the center of it. He put same like bone inside of it, expect this one were three-centimetres width. Hole on it, another bone: This time two-centimetres width. Last one but not the least one.. One-centimetres width. They were all having holes so they would go in a really small space, hiding it. It would be a surprise for enemy when he saws it. Sanmaru went for the chest now. He didnt know what to build for first. Then he get an idea. He made a mechanism that would put ribs out when the enemy gets too close. He put them on their real places, only changing the way the would go. So if the enemy gets too close, Taka is able to stab its ribs through of the enemy. He made same like system in the back of Taka. So when Sanmaru activates this system, Taka becames a little like hedgehog. The spikes of this "hedgehog" is just little more dangerous.. Sanmaru went for the legs. He wanted to add one thing on them. He put a extra bone scales to there. He put few of thems in that position, that if Taka hits some one with them, it will make bad scars on the area, it has hit. They were sharp. Sanmaru hid them with extra wood and when the time is right, they can be used as a weapon. Normally they work as extra defense as well. Sanmaru left few bones for later upgrading. He were finished with this one now, too. He put the bones aside, hiding them well for intruders. He were done with this part now, too. The next part were only decorations for the puppet. It would not be long but still, they got to be personal, you know?
Part 3, Making it kewl.
Sanmaru wanted to make few "cool things" on it. Sanmaru took the puppet for outside, near to the lake. He washed the scars, tooking blood away from it. He also secured the parts that were easiest to see. He put little more cloth on the suit. He also dryed the wood to little darker. It were darker than normal and clean! Sanmaru took a cleaning swim, too. He were covered with blood, and bone fragments. He had some own scars, too. Example, when he had been doing the blades for arms, he got over five scars. The water were warm. Sanmaru took a long "bath". He closed his eyes for a while and after about ten minutes, he get off from the water. He dried himself. He put the clothes on and went back to the body, tooking a wood fragment from the ground and little grass. He combined them to make a brush. Sanmaru were next to the body now. This part would not be long but still, lets tell about it. Sanmaru took a wood fragment, or brush that he had made, from the table. He draw few kabuki like decorations on Takas face. He also wanted to make a clothing for it. He took the Feitans clothing off. He made it lighter, so Taka would be faster. Sanmaru dyed the hair of Takas black, and put the clothes on. He changed the blue, to darker. Sanmaru were proud of his first puppet. He were happy when it did succeed with first try. It would not be nice to destroy such a good body. Sanmaru continued the decoration making. The Marionet. It were dark blue, almost black actually, Marionet now. Sanmaru made a mark that he would make to all of his Marionets. He also added the teeths back to mouth, giving little more defence for lips. They were not defended with such a defense as everything else. Sanmaru also made a cape that would hide Taka for sudden strikes. The cape were black, hiding the body of Taka. It had a hood also. It hid the weapons too. Dark Angel with a Scythe on her right hand and cross on left hand. Last thing to do would be the controlling of it. It will not be easy.
Part 4, Giving a life to my Marionet.
Sanmaru took the Marionet, stepping outside. The first thing to do would be connecting the chakra lines. It were harder than it heards. Sanmaru would have to make several chakra lines to connect every single part. He actually had few tactics how to do that but lets talk about them later. Sanmaru tried to concentrate a little chakra first. When he had done that he tried to connect the lines. Sanmaru were standing about four metres ago from Marionet. He tried to connect them, and for first glance, it were like he would have done that. But in the real life. He failed. The Chakra had blew away and chakra had burn Sanmarus finger tips. He had been trying too much. He tried again. This time there were a good amount of chakra. Sanmaru tried to connect the chakra strings, failing. Again. Then he tried once more. This time there were a perfect amount of chakra. Sanmaru tried to connect the Chakra with the puppet. Sanmaru had fail.. One time more. Three failures in a row. Sanmaru were thinking about the reason. He knew what were wrong: He had been doing the Marionet for a whole day. It really takes all of the strength away. Sanmaru were almost asleep and tried to keep awake. He went to the tent, hiding the Taka again. He fall asleep as fast as possible. Smiling.
Morning,
when he had wake up, he took his sandvich.. Like every morning, day, or evening. He loved sanviches.. But back to the topic again. The day were beatiful again, this time there were not even clouds on the sky. Little wind in air and not even a piece of cloud in Sanmarus sight. He started the day with running a little lap around the wood.. Six kilometres. Sanmaru went to the place where he had hid the Taka. It seemed like no-one would even saw it. Sanmaru took it with him to the training place and when Sanmaru were ready to try Marionet controlling again. First he made little chakra on his finger tips. Then he tried it. He saw when the chakra started to gain length and just before they touched the Marionet, they disappeared. Poof. They were gone. Sanmaru knew that he would not do it at his first try and gave it another try. He made the same as last time. Sanmarus face were full of hope. It worked. The chakra lines were in Taka now. Sanmaru tried to raise it on two feets. He were excited about what would happen. Taka stood up. Sanmaru were happy about this. He tried to raise right arm. It raised. He made walked few hundred metres with it. Then he wanted to test the weapons of his Marionet. He made the weapons of arms come out. He tried to cut one of the remains of his earlier training puppets. He used the Marionet to cut one of those head off. It were perfect. The day, Marionet, everything. Sanmaru thought how to carry the Marionet with him. He knew what to do. He prepared a "ceremony". For what? Summoning. Sanmaru would summon the Marionet to him always when he needs it. He made few applies on the back of Marionet. They would disappear in the first fight or even earlier, but it were needed for Summoning. When they have been drawed once, it will always be same. Sanmaru took Feitans blood, and his own. He made a mark on the back of Taka. This werent normal Summoning. This were only like those scroll ones. Sanmaru would have to use the same hand always. He took the smallest of his rock knives and made symbols in his right arm. He were now able to summon the Marionet. He still wanted to try. The scroll were replaced with arm. Sanmaru put chakra on the symbols, so even the arm would blew up, the summoning would still work.. When Sanmaru had made the symbols on his left arm. Sanmaru hid those symbols under his bandages. He were done. His first puppet ever. And he were able to control it like normal Marionet user. He tried one thing also. He tried to re-place the Chakra lines as fast as possible. So if the Chakra lines are destroyed he would be able to reconnect them. Sanmaru were done. He cleaned the place. He hid the bones for later use. He were now done. He went back to the Amegakure.
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approoooooooooooooved~~ Just wait for one more approval, also, to get your rank, go and register it in the rank registration section. If you don't wanna join everyone else in major-dom, then i suggest that you do both forms ^.^;;
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Ok. It seems like there is rp sample needed. May i use the same or another ?
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it doesn't matter. ^^
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