Humunculs song

xD my lyrics for a song about us/FMA. lol

We are homunculi, sin and virtues alike...
Pride,Envy,m Greed, Lust and all of that like.
The dead brought to life, no matter the cost
Gluttony,Wrath, Sloth, Despair.
All immortal but dead all the time
Vaingory, Acedia, Extravagence.
They all are the spawn of man trying to be strong
Chastity,Temperance, all men were wrong
They failed and they all lost something of them
Diligence, Patience, and Humility
Each is a symbol, a sign of their loss
Life created from life that was long lost
Kindness, Generosity
All borne by two people, ruled by their word
Father, mother, the source of them all
Among them, some stand, fight, rebel or ignore
None can resist the soon-coming war
a war to engulf them and destroy them all
sooner or later the weak will all fall
The homunculi will be
no more

tell me whatcha thinkj...

xD im honored. just wait until Envy sings it. xD

I can't get the tune right TT.TT
Maybe write some lyrics to an instrumental of ANY kind, so just go find an instrumental soundtrack, lol.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Us4PZsfIV8E <- Here's a song I just recorded for the homunculi of the site, called 'Compassion of Sin'

okay. xD how about i TRY my best to type the tune? there is NO song that goes with these lyrics. XP

Dada dadada-da, dada dada dada
Da, Dada, Da, Da, dada da da da then just go with that. XP i wish i could sing it myself since im the only one who understands it. xD if the daada doesn't work, just pick a tune for it. lol

and it was sort of based off of your first one, alexander's lullaby.xD if that helps any...

oh, that helps ^.^ I'll sing it to the same tune as Alexander's Lullaby

cool. when do you reckon it'll be done?

oh and it posted it in the soundtrack thing. xD plus one for Pride based off of the song, "My Way" by Frank Sinatra JR. xD if its possible, could you try that ne to the tune of Weird Al's polka version? I can try and find which medley he put it with. O.O xD

I wont be editing the music tracks ^.^;; It's just my mediocre singing and my making up the songs for ya. I'm finished the homunculus song, I'll upload it tomorrow

xD okays...

bah, its crap sounding, but here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?nd2ynzgdzy5

Are you kidding me, it's awesome! ^^ and you made the homunculus names sound like some kind of awesome latin chanting. xD you really need more of me (Pride.xD) in your work. xD

bwahahahah, I'm glad you liked my terrible singing then XD Give me more lyrics and I will make your ears bleed more with my tone-deaf voice XD

xD i love it though... You are really an amazing singer. O_O

che, i dont think so... bah, i should add a poll to this topic and see who thinks I suck/am good at singing, lol

lol anways, in 40 minutes you will hear darky's voice actor (yours truly!~) sing this song in his loevly british accent. xD no im not british...but darky has a slight accent as well as a little kiddy voice. xD i just suck at V.A.ing...