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Post by Guest Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:55 am

Name: Benjamin Lee Havoc
State Name: Earth Alchemist
Alias/Nickname: Ben

Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Amestrian
DOB: October 12, 1998
Birthplace: Dublith
Current Location: Wanderer
Height: 6'4
Weight: 140
Eye color: Brown
Hair color: Dark Brown (Natural haircolor is dirty blonde)
Hair Style: Messy
Clothing: Dressy
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Pet Breed: N/A
Pet gender: N/A
Pet name: N/A

Personality: Friendly, Humerous, Shy at times.
Likes: Reading, Nature, Animals, Picnics, Video-games, Cigarettes
Dislikes: Conformists
Dark Secret: He's Pansexual
Deepest Fear: N/A
Idol: His Father
Closest Friend: N/A
Rival: N/A

Skills: Alchemy, Kickboxing, Various forms of Martial arts
Weapons: Basic alchemy, and a handgun at times.
Transportation: Train
Special Item: A necklace his Mum gave him after his dad passed away.

Family:
Grandfather- Jean Havoc: Dead
Grandmother-Marissa Havoc: Dead
Father-Kenneth Havoc: Dead
Mother- Alice Havoc: Alive
Sister: Ann Dupliss: Alive
Brother-in-Law: Shay Dupliss: Alive

History: Benjamin lived with his Mother, Sister, and Father untill he turned 15, then he went off to experience the far-off cities he longed to see. His Mother did not want him to leave, but his Father encouraged him to live his life to the fullest. And with that, he left. Oh, how he adored his father. He practically worshiped at his feet, for his Father was a great man. He served in the military for 28 years before dieing in a war after Ben left home. And it crushed Benjamin to peices after he received the terrible news. He never got to tell him good-bye, or his plans to join the military, or how he aspires to become State alchemist- then Fuhrer! After the seemingly long funeral, Ben's mother handed him a necklace..His Father's favorate. Ben set off on his long journey again, first stop- The military.

Ben traveled for 2 months- by train, walking, and rental cars so he could get to Central; the place where he believed he was destined to be. His money was depleting more and more each day, and soon he had to start staying in over-night shelters untill he could get a job. He worked at a resteraunt for a few weeks to make a bit more dough so he could further his adventure. It iritated him that he had to work at a resteraunt. He was shooting for such a high goal, and there he was. Working at burgerking. Oh, well. Everyone has to start somewhere. After that ordeal ended, he finally reached central. Quite exited, he applied for a lesser job. Second Liutenant. You gotta work your way up, hm?

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 09, 2010 12:09 pm

Looks great, except I think your bio needs to be longer. Very Happy

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Post by Alaric Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:02 pm

Nice character. As Tobi said, your bio has to be longer, two paragraphs longer, actually. Your RP sample is supposed to be longer as well, but I'll let that one slide, as it's close to the required lot as well.
Also, your character, just to point it out if you didn't already know, you're the canon character Jean Havoc's great grandson, not son, so that would mean your father is the son of Jean's son/daughter, as this is based in our time, the others lived in their peak 100 years ago ^^, minus Ed and Al, they lived their peak about 80 years ago, lol. Well, just make your bio longer and then it's approvable ^.^ Thanks for registering though, and bump the topic once your finished the bio ^^
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Post by Guest Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:26 pm

Sorry for my confusion. I havn't wrote a bio in such a long time! I'm a bit rusty as it seems. xD

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:27 pm

Approved by me.

Now you need either Alex or Kenya to second that.

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:29 pm

So, now we play the waiting game.

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:30 pm

Indeed

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Post by Alaric Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:44 pm

It's a three paragraph thing, but eh, screw it, I'm not the patient kind, so yeah, approved. Welcome to the sight, Mr Havoc ^^
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