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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:56 am

She walked to the crime scene. Ilona had to come back to Central to investigate this case as a state prosecutor and looked at the scene in disgust. At April 4th, 2010, 12PM, a prostitute who was walking around this area was brutally murdered. Ilona walked towards the body and could'nt stop but flinch. This woman was killed in the most horrific way possible and the killer did not leave any trace of him..This is going to be hard..

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:01 am

lori was sitting in a cop car, a blanket around her sholders as she shook. she had been a witness to the crime, and was in a state of terror at the moment

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:03 am

Ilona heard there was a witness to the site and walked over to the police car. She looked so young and obviously frightened so Ilona put a reasurring hand on the girl's shoulder.
"I'm just going to ask a few questions..Can you do that for my sweetie?"She said with a calm smile.
"Take your time, I know it must be hard for you.."


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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:05 am

lori slowly looked up at the women, her eyes empy with only fear left. "i-i-ill t-try m-ma'am" lori said, she voice shaking unbelivable

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:07 am

Ilona nodded and sat beside the girl waiting paitently. The victim was stabbed multiple times and some of her internal organs are missing. To witness something like that must have been terrifying...
"Just tell me everything you saw, even the tiniest detail. It'll take a minute sweetheart, just take your time.."

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:15 am

"i-i d-dont r-remeber m-m-much at the m-moment" lori said, pulling the blanket tighter around her as she closed her eyes, flash backs running though her mind. "i-i remeber w-womens n-name, its l-loreta greensburg, s-she had b-been t-talking to me j-just a f-few m-mintue before it happened. s-she had t-two kids" lori said holding her stomic as more of the grusome flash backs came, making her want to throw up

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:18 am

Ilona sighs and pats the girl's back, they we still have to keep her. She's a vital witness. Ilona grabbed her notepad and jotted down what the witness had just said..
"Loreta Greensburg..two kids..Was the two kids with her at the time?"She asked, offering the girl a towel and a bottle of water.

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:34 am

lori nodded thanking her as she took small sips "h-her sister-in-law and brother" she said closing her eyes "she told me that she was almost off her shift. a-and that she could wait to get home. b-but as i w-was w-walking away i-i heard her scream" lori gulped and started shaking "as i ran back, i saw him."

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:36 am

Ilona jotted down what she just said, slightly turning back to the scene where the police was gathering evidence and so on.
"Do you recall what the murderer looked like?"She said slowly..

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:45 am

lori started shaking as her eyes went blank, as did her voice "i could tell she was already dead by the time i got there, i hide behind the dumster and just stood there watching him, he had a sliver hunting knife. he had riped open her thoat so brutaly, it looked like he had done it more then one time because of the riped pieces of skin arond it, and he was" she shived "he was licking parts of her skin, hten cuting it off and putting it in a bag" she said and cover her mouth as she held it in. "oh god"

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:48 am

"Thank you..You did very well but we still need you for this investigation, can you hold on for a bit longer?"Ilona said while jotting down what she had just said. She couldn't help but shiver as her description fitted with...Ilona shook the thought from her head.
"By the way, what is your name sweetheart??"She said while putting her hand on the girl's shoulder.

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 11:59 am

"i-i think i can" she said looking up at the women "i-its lori kiki" she said quietly

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:01 pm

"Thank you Lori..If theres anything you need or you have any questions just come to me."Ilona said with a smile to make the girl comfortable. Now all she had to do is wait for more people to help..She cannot to this investigation alone.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:03 pm

Revel let out a loud yawn. She jumped down from a nearby tree and rubbed her eyes. "Uhnn.. what's going on here?" she rubbed her eyes sleepily, looking like a child who'd just waken from a nap.
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:05 pm

Ilona saw Revel approach and quickly walked over so she wouldn't see what was in the site.
"Revel dear, do you need anything?"She said with a smile, hoping Revel did not see anything.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:08 pm

Revel wiped her eyes sleepily and yawned again, almost in a cute fashion. "Hmm.. dead body?" She said in a half-asleep tone. "I.. need.." she couldn't evaluate... she was still very tired..
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:10 pm

Ilona sighed and escorted Revel to the police car next to Lori and wrapped a blanket around her in motherly way.
"Do you know anything about this Revel?"She asked.

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:11 pm

Revel was confused, the blanket being wrapped around her. "The body? No.. I was sleeping.." she yawned, almost like a cat. "I did hear some screaming.. maybe.. it's hard to distinguish dreams and reality.."
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:13 pm

Ilona sighs and let the matter go. She wouldn't know anything but just in case..
"After you are well rested Revel, were going to have to take you under investigation as a witness, you okay with that?"Ilona asked, jotting down on a notebook on what she had just said.

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:13 pm

lori sat back in the seat of the car, she was very tired but didnt want to close her eyes, for the flash backs would keep coming back

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Post by Revel Yao Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:15 pm

Revel rubbed her eyes again and laid down.. on the ground.. right there.. She curled into a little ball, "Okay.. sounds.. good.. zzz..." she whispered, quickly drifting back to sleep with her head resting on her hands.
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:24 pm

Acedia was standing in a dark alleyway where she found herself holding a dagger with blood on it. She was confused what had she done and where was she? Last thing she remember was talking to a woman about her family and the next thing she knew she was in this alley way. What had she done and what is going on with her memory was she going crazy? Acedia quickly went into the fetal position crying in the shadows with the drip of the bloody dagger and the drips of her tears each echoing in the night. She was scared to think of what was going to happen next and she couldn’t help but feel her life was coming to an end. What was she to do and she couldn’t help, but whimper just slightly after each drip of her tears.

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Post by Guest Mon Apr 05, 2010 12:29 pm

Ilona walked back to the crime scene as the investigation team stated removing the body for an autopsy. She then noticed the rusted brown blood stains and started following them. Then the stains stopped through a corner. The murder must have ran here but seeing as the crime is 3 hours old, the murderer could be anywhere....

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Post by Guest Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:50 am

Takegami appeared behind Ilona, wearing his all black nazi uniform, his face cold and calculating. His azure eyes seemed to pierce right through here, calculating and analyzing the crime scene. He sighed slighlty, the stench of blood still fresh in the air.

"Whoever did this made sure to lead us right off of their trail..."

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Post by Guest Tue Apr 06, 2010 2:59 am

"Yes, It does seem like this whole ordeal has been committed by a professional. Hello, by the way."

Despair slowly moved into the visible spectrum. He was wearing what he usually wore with a single Helios blade attached to the left side of his belt. Grinning as usual, he carried on.

"It seems, if I'm not to bold to say, like the work of a homunculus. I'm guessing one of you is dealing with this murder?" He said indicating Takegami and Ilona. He facial expressions gave off the usual vibe, untrustworthy and scheming

"So it shouldn't be hard to track them all down..."

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